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**phuthuy-zin** · 12-04-2008, 07:16 PM

This is my essay, it has some mistakes that I hope everybody can help me to solve the. So please take it in your free time or comfortable state.

Single Parent Adoption

Everybody in the model life is looking after a woman has a baby without husband or a man has a baby without wife easier than in the past. A single parent adoption today often causes of many problems in social life. When a child is cared by a single parent, he has not enough affection of parents or nutrition for growing up. Therefore, he won’t have a firm psychology and will being a disadvantage in social.
Many single parent adoptions often do not have enough time to play game with their children and interested in their children lifestyle. Therefore, the children are developing with no affection of parents. Besides, the children do not have ensuring about nutrition because single parent often do not have enough information about children’s regimen. Thus, the children are not growing up with enough height and intelligent.
The children who live with single parent often have some psychology diseases because they have to live under pressure of no mum or no dad feeling. A single parent often does not explain correct reasons for children about there are no dad or no mum. Also, a child no dad or no mum is being in prejudice of people and has fewer interests. In addition, there are many difficult things to balance between children and the single parent demands because the children don’t want to share sentiment with a new person who is become a new dad or new mum of them.
To sum of, children need to have enough parents for taking care of them because a perfect family is a certain basis for children to develop good personalities. A family with enough parents forms good children and creates many good manners for society. Also, a sound family is an important element for building a good society.

Regard,
Phuthuy-zin

12-04-2008, 07:16 PM	#3
phuthuy-zin Nhập môn đệ tử Tham gia ngày: Apr 2008 Bài gửi: 3 :	This is my essay, it has some mistakes that I hope everybody can help me to solve the. So please take it in your free time or comfortable state. Single Parent Adoption Everybody in the model life is looking after a woman has a baby without husband or a man has a baby without wife easier than in the past. A single parent adoption today often causes of many problems in social life. When a child is cared by a single parent, he has not enough affection of parents or nutrition for growing up. Therefore, he won’t have a firm psychology and will being a disadvantage in social. Many single parent adoptions often do not have enough time to play game with their children and interested in their children lifestyle. Therefore, the children are developing with no affection of parents. Besides, the children do not have ensuring about nutrition because single parent often do not have enough information about children’s regimen. Thus, the children are not growing up with enough height and intelligent. The children who live with single parent often have some psychology diseases because they have to live under pressure of no mum or no dad feeling. A single parent often does not explain correct reasons for children about there are no dad or no mum. Also, a child no dad or no mum is being in prejudice of people and has fewer interests. In addition, there are many difficult things to balance between children and the single parent demands because the children don’t want to share sentiment with a new person who is become a new dad or new mum of them. To sum of, children need to have enough parents for taking care of them because a perfect family is a certain basis for children to develop good personalities. A family with enough parents forms good children and creates many good manners for society. Also, a sound family is an important element for building a good society. Regard, Phuthuy-zin